http://www.jonathanpinnock.com/wiki_dotdash/index.php?title=Piss_and_Patchouli&feed=atom&action=historyPiss and Patchouli - Revision history2024-03-29T00:55:23ZRevision history for this page on the wikiMediaWiki 1.32.1http://www.jonathanpinnock.com/wiki_dotdash/index.php?title=Piss_and_Patchouli&diff=395&oldid=prevJonathan: /* Inspiration */2014-06-20T08:02:19Z<p><span dir="auto"><span class="autocomment">Inspiration</span></span></p>
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</table>Jonathanhttp://www.jonathanpinnock.com/wiki_dotdash/index.php?title=Piss_and_Patchouli&diff=337&oldid=prevJonathan: /* Publications */2014-06-19T23:46:15Z<p><span dir="auto"><span class="autocomment">Publications</span></span></p>
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</table>Jonathanhttp://www.jonathanpinnock.com/wiki_dotdash/index.php?title=Piss_and_Patchouli&diff=177&oldid=prevJonathan: Created page with "===Inspiration=== '''Piss and Patchouli''' was originally written for Round Three of the 2008 ''Whittaker Prize''. The prompt used was the phrase ''orange wellies''. It wa..."2014-06-17T13:20:10Z<p>Created page with "===Inspiration=== '''Piss and Patchouli''' was originally written for Round Three of the 2008 ''<a href="/wiki_dotdash/index.php/Whittaker_Prize" class="mw-redirect" title="Whittaker Prize">Whittaker Prize</a>''. The prompt used was the phrase ''orange wellies''. It wa..."</p>
<p><b>New page</b></p><div>===Inspiration===<br />
'''Piss and Patchouli''' was originally written for Round Three of the 2008 ''[[Whittaker Prize]]''. The prompt used was the phrase ''orange wellies''. It was given a score of 71/100 by the judge, Rachel Green, putting it in 5th equal place out of 19. The judge "liked this but it meandered. I would have liked the MC and the fireman to piece together Astrid's life. Nice ending, though."<br />
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===Placings===<br />
After a minor edit, '''Piss and Patchouli''' was longlisted for the September 2008 ''[[Cadenza]]'' competition.<br />
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===Publications===<br />
After a further minor edit, '''Piss and Patchouli''' was published in Issue 95 of ''[[Litro]]'' in May 2010.<br />
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===Notes===<br />
John Martyn gets a namecheck in this story, but it's actually Richard Thompson's song ''[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mirror_Blue Beeswing]''' that was the primary influence for the character of Astrid. I liked the idea of the main character having made his choice between a conventional career and life on the edge, yet still vicariously hankering after the latter even though his former lover's life had demonstrated to him the risks. I guess it's about wanting to have it both ways.<br />
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I didn't take Rachel Green's advice, partly through sheer laziness and partly because it would have made it a different story. I think the main character has to work it all out for himself, or at least convince himself that he has.</div>Jonathan