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Inspiration

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===Inspiration===
'''Internal Affairs''' was originally written for ''[[Café Doom Flash Challenge]]'' number 126, in August 2008, in response to the prompt word ''mirror''. It came fourth equal out of six entries, with no votes whatsoever.

===Publications===
After reading the story out at the ''[[Verulam Writers' Circle]]'', my chum Dave Weaver suggested a much better punchline, and with this duly in place, '''Internal Affairs''' was published by ''[[Flashshot]]'' on January 3rd, 2009.

===Notes===
This was the original punchline:

{{quote|My doctor withdrew his fingers, took off the latex gloves and looked at me.

“Have you been hanging out with those magicians again?” he said.}}

and here's the much more succinct final version:

{{quote|"Thanks doc," I said to him, wincing but grateful. "That's magic!"}}

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 ===Publications===
-After reading the story out at the ''[[Verulam Writers' Circle]]'', my chum Dave Weaver suggested a much better punchline, and with this duly in place, '''Internal Affairs''' was published by ''[[Flashshot]]'' on January 3rd, 2009.
+After reading the story out at the ''[[Verulam Writers' Circle]]'', my chum Dave Weaver suggested a much better punchline, and with this duly in place, '''Internal Affairs''' was published by ''[http://www.gwthomas.org/flashshotindex.htm Flashshot]'' on January 3rd, 2009.
 ===Notes===

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 ===Inspiration===
-'''Internal Affairs''' was originally written for ''[[Café Doom Flash Challenge]]'' number 126, in August 2008, in response to the prompt word ''mirror''. It came fourth equal out of six entries, with no votes whatsoever.
+'''Internal Affairs''' was originally written for ''[[Café Doom Flash Challenge]]'' number 126, in August 2008, in response to the prompt word ''latex''. It came fourth equal out of six entries, with no votes whatsoever.
 ===Publications===