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		<title>Jonathan: /* Publication */</title>
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		<updated>2014-06-19T22:46:33Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;&lt;span dir=&quot;auto&quot;&gt;&lt;span class=&quot;autocomment&quot;&gt;Publication&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
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				&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; style=&quot;background-color: #fff; color: #222; text-align: center;&quot;&gt;← Older revision&lt;/td&gt;
				&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; style=&quot;background-color: #fff; color: #222; text-align: center;&quot;&gt;Revision as of 22:46, 19 June 2014&lt;/td&gt;
				&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; class=&quot;diff-lineno&quot; id=&quot;mw-diff-left-l3&quot; &gt;Line 3:&lt;/td&gt;
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class=&#039;diff-marker&#039;&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&#039;diff-marker&#039;&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class=&#039;diff-marker&#039;&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;===Publication===&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&#039;diff-marker&#039;&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;===Publication===&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class=&#039;diff-marker&#039;&gt;−&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;Breathe In, Breathe Out&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;, suitably adapted and then subjected to further editing, was published as part of Jane Smith&amp;#039;s &amp;#039;&amp;#039;[&lt;del class=&quot;diffchange diffchange-inline&quot;&gt;[&lt;/del&gt;Greyling Bay&lt;del class=&quot;diffchange diffchange-inline&quot;&gt;]&lt;/del&gt;]&amp;#039;&amp;#039; project, in January 2009.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&#039;diff-marker&#039;&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;Breathe In, Breathe Out&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;, suitably adapted and then subjected to further editing, was published as part of Jane Smith&amp;#039;s &amp;#039;&amp;#039;[&lt;ins class=&quot;diffchange diffchange-inline&quot;&gt;http://greylingbay.blogspot.co.uk &lt;/ins&gt;Greyling Bay]&amp;#039;&amp;#039; project, in January 2009.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class=&#039;diff-marker&#039;&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&#039;diff-marker&#039;&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class=&#039;diff-marker&#039;&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;===Notes===&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&#039;diff-marker&#039;&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;===Notes===&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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		<author><name>Jonathan</name></author>
		
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		<title>Jonathan: /* Inspiration */</title>
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		<updated>2014-06-17T12:46:41Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;&lt;span dir=&quot;auto&quot;&gt;&lt;span class=&quot;autocomment&quot;&gt;Inspiration&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
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				&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; style=&quot;background-color: #fff; color: #222; text-align: center;&quot;&gt;Revision as of 12:46, 17 June 2014&lt;/td&gt;
				&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; class=&quot;diff-lineno&quot; id=&quot;mw-diff-left-l1&quot; &gt;Line 1:&lt;/td&gt;
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&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class=&#039;diff-marker&#039;&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;===Inspiration===&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&#039;diff-marker&#039;&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;===Inspiration===&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class=&#039;diff-marker&#039;&gt;−&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;Breathe In, Breathe Out&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039; was originally written for Day Four of the &amp;#039;&amp;#039;[[Bootcamp]]&amp;#039;&amp;#039; August Blast in 2008. The prompt used was &amp;quot;A sea-fog like gun smoke&amp;quot;. As things turned out, I bailed out of the Blast a day later, partly because I was struggling to keep up with the pace, and partly because I realised that [[Alex Keegan]] was the judge for a competition I&amp;#039;d recently submitted an entry for.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&#039;diff-marker&#039;&gt;+&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;Breathe In, Breathe Out&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039; was originally written for Day Four of the &amp;#039;&amp;#039;[[Bootcamp]]&lt;ins class=&quot;diffchange diffchange-inline&quot;&gt;&amp;#039;&amp;#039; &lt;/ins&gt;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;August Blast&lt;ins class=&quot;diffchange diffchange-inline&quot;&gt;&amp;#039;&amp;#039; &lt;/ins&gt;in 2008. The prompt used was &amp;quot;A sea-fog like gun smoke&amp;quot;. As things turned out, I bailed out of the &lt;ins class=&quot;diffchange diffchange-inline&quot;&gt;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&lt;/ins&gt;Blast&lt;ins class=&quot;diffchange diffchange-inline&quot;&gt;&amp;#039;&amp;#039; &lt;/ins&gt;a day later, partly because I was struggling to keep up with the pace, and partly because I realised that [[Alex Keegan]] was the judge for a competition I&amp;#039;d recently submitted an entry for.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class=&#039;diff-marker&#039;&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&#039;diff-marker&#039;&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class=&#039;diff-marker&#039;&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;===Publication===&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;td class=&#039;diff-marker&#039;&gt; &lt;/td&gt;&lt;td style=&quot;background-color: #f8f9fa; color: #222; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #eaecf0; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;&quot;&gt;&lt;div&gt;===Publication===&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;
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		<author><name>Jonathan</name></author>
		
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		<title>Jonathan: Created page with &quot;===Inspiration=== &#039;&#039;&#039;Breathe In, Breathe Out&#039;&#039;&#039; was originally written for Day Four of the &#039;&#039;Bootcamp&#039;&#039; August Blast in 2008. The prompt used was &quot;A sea-fog like gun smoke...&quot;</title>
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		<updated>2014-06-17T12:46:10Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Created page with &amp;quot;===Inspiration=== &amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;Breathe In, Breathe Out&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039; was originally written for Day Four of the &amp;#039;&amp;#039;&lt;a href=&quot;/wiki_dotdash/index.php/Bootcamp&quot; class=&quot;mw-redirect&quot; title=&quot;Bootcamp&quot;&gt;Bootcamp&lt;/a&gt;&amp;#039;&amp;#039; August Blast in 2008. The prompt used was &amp;quot;A sea-fog like gun smoke...&amp;quot;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;New page&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div&gt;===Inspiration===&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;Breathe In, Breathe Out&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039; was originally written for Day Four of the &amp;#039;&amp;#039;[[Bootcamp]]&amp;#039;&amp;#039; August Blast in 2008. The prompt used was &amp;quot;A sea-fog like gun smoke&amp;quot;. As things turned out, I bailed out of the Blast a day later, partly because I was struggling to keep up with the pace, and partly because I realised that [[Alex Keegan]] was the judge for a competition I&amp;#039;d recently submitted an entry for.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
===Publication===&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;Breathe In, Breathe Out&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;, suitably adapted and then subjected to further editing, was published as part of Jane Smith&amp;#039;s &amp;#039;&amp;#039;[[Greyling Bay]]&amp;#039;&amp;#039; project, in January 2009.&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
===Notes===&lt;br /&gt;
On revisiting this, it&amp;#039;s struck me that one of my favourite phrases got lost between my submission and the edit prior to publication:&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
{{quote|Sam knows it, even though his head is made of wool and his brain can only knit shapeless three-armed pullovers out of it.}}&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
Maybe I&amp;#039;ll reuse that somewhere one day.&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
		<author><name>Jonathan</name></author>
		
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